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Hello reader. Welcome to suicidal spirit, the story will lead on from here.

This is Neve and Olivia. Neve is 13 Olivia is 14. They walked out of the orphanage where they sat down to eat their breakfast when the floor rumbled loudly, as the floor beneath Neve and Olivia opened and they fell in, looking up to see a dark figure cackling. Here they tell their stories:

Neve

I walked around hopelessly in the darkness peering each side as the cold stone walls enclosed me. I soon came along a path to a wooden inn, I entered shivering. The fire was warm, the current floorboard I was on creaked as a person said "Is anyone there?"

"Yes." I answer positivley. "My name is Neve." There was a long pause before a boy came out. A blue eye,blond floppy hair and one red eye.

"Don't ask." He says. I held my breath as I let the words flow in my brain and then breathed out. I never felt so happy for someone to be here with me.

"What are you doing here?" He asks, " How did you get here?" I breathed in as I told him about the seemingly like earthquake. He nodded as he handed me a cold object, his eyes told me not to look as I placed it in my pocket.

"Let's go." I say as I opened to go out, stepping outside I walked forward until we came to a dead end, He was left behind a bit but he didn't seemed to be bothered. As I touched the wall a I fell down a big gap gripping onto the side, the side was soft; I realised it was his hand.

"Thank you." I say.

"I'm sorry for being so rude, my name is Yamaru." He says, I stared confused for a bit.. "Just call me Chris." I nodded as we carried on walking, there were deathly screams everywhere. Some at unexpecting times which made me jump.

"YAMARU! Doko ni imasu ka? Watashi wa doko demo kensaku shite kimashita!" Someone shouted.

"Anata ga shinpai suru hitsuyō wa arimasen'node, watashi wa watashi ga mitsuketa kono on'nanoko to anzendakedo, yoku kanojo wa watashi o hakken shimashita!" He answered back, I didn't know what this meant.

"Someone was looking for me." Chris says.

"Anata ga kirainanode, ōku no yakunitatanai ningen o shinrai okashiku teishi!" someone answered.

"Kanojo wa chigau.. Anata ga sono bakku o toru, watashi wa kanojo o shinrai suru koto ga dekimasu shitte imasu. Kanojo wa shōjikina hitodesu. Watashi wa hontōni kanojo wa watashi o kowagatte inakatta, kanojo wa hokanohito ni chigau... Anata wa, kono yōna lovley ningen o kotowarudarou to shinjite suru koto wa dekimasen. Sore wa kanojo ga anata o kowagassa renai koto o imi shimasu."

he answered back and he rolled his eyes as I saw a dark figure come, Purple hair, silky and long, beetle black eyes, the type of face you would expect a villain to have, purple cloak and dark black boots.

"Kanojo wa nihongo o hanasu nodesu ka?" She asked in again her dark voice.

"Lya." He answered.

"Hello then dear human." She says bending forward and scanning me top to bottom.

"Hello Madam." I say back shivering nervously.

"You can call me Symatarogo." Her majestic purple hair glowing in the small peek of light on the ceiling.

"Kanojo wa sore o iu koto wa dekimasen." He replied rolling his eyes.

"In other words Variety." She says grinning.

"My name is Neve." I say. We sat down to take a rest.. I dreamt a long time..

goodnight.

Olivia

I peered around the place I landed right outside a dark mansion.. Strange. I walked around to find a way to escape but all I could see was the dark forest on both sides, I finally had the courage to go and knock on the door...

"Wytrzymać!" A muffled nouse came, "Cześć?" A boy asks as he opened the door. He wore a cute outfit that seemed to match his hair.

"Hello. You English?" He asks smiling.

"Yes." I answered back smiling politely.

"I am Polish." He answers flipping the fringe to a side. Then a girl that was tall came down and said to him, "Kto w świecie jest ten młody człowiek? Mówiłem ci, nie Ket Strangers in a mimo to niech dziewczyny ? jak śmiesz! jeśli chcesz żyć w tym domu idziesz przez przepisy ! Nie biorę to zachowanie w moim domu. nie wiem nawet ją! Jest ona nawet polskiego ?! nie potrafi nawet zrozumieć cię ! dostać się w młodego człowieka iu to rozwiązać , nie waż się zrobić to jeszcze raz . Jestem twoją matką , a także nie sprawiają, że trudno mi opiekować się tobą ! Nie chcę powiedzieć to niegrzeczne słowa , ale jesteś takim dupkiem jak dobrze! sprawienie, że moje życie to trudny czas !"

"no mama to ktoś i może faktycznie zaufanie, wygląda mi pan wierzyć. ona jest po angielsku , a także, że dobrze learing mi mówić po angielsku , po prostu dać jej mama szansę. Wiem, że nie mam zaufania do innych ludzi dobrze, ale ona jest inna obiecuję ci . i można powiedzieć, że nigdy złamać obietnicę, a zwłaszcza ta

jedno , czy ona w żaden sposób łamią reguły to ja jej powiem . I powie jej z regułami

dom, powiem jej, jak się zachowywać , i powie jej, co robimy , i będzie jej powiedzieć , co trzeba ją zrobić i będę jej powiedzieć." He says, his mother I think she is, breathed.

"my name is Lolita, this is my youngest son Shae." she says gripping him tight.

"Nice to meet you Lolita." I say holding out my hand politely.

"Mówiłem ci , że była miła." He answered grinning.

I walked up to a room and opened a door shocked to see corpses everywhere. as I glanced about I felt a hand on my shoulder, I turned around to find a girl there. Dark black hair, golden yellow eyes and pale white skin.

"Don't be afraid I'm just a spirit here." She says smiling. I gulped as I took a step back. I looked over my shoulder, these people weren't brutally murdered they committed suicide, I could see that by the ropes and knives around the room. She shut the door behind her flipping the keys in her hands.

"No escape. I'm not going to hurt you, if you die.. It will be painless." She says as she went out if the room. I sat down hopelessly staring out if the one window.

"Hello?" Someone asks, I thought that it was Shae.

"Hi." I say as the door opened. It was Shae but he had a blank expression in his face.

"Erm.. How did you get in here?" He asks.

"Through a door, duh." I say rolling my eyes.

"Okay come out, don't go in there again." He says dragging me out of the room. I sat down on a chair staring at a wall, there she was again the girl.

"You're a smart one aren't you?" She says.

"No.. I just had an idea. ItMs nit like my brain can just think of something with a click from my hand can it?" I say.

she rolled her eyes and sat with me, that was when Shae came in.

"What the." He says backing away.

"Co ty tutaj robisz? Mówiłem ci nie wyjdzie , a mimo to zdecydował się wyjść ?" He says again in his Polish language as she grins.

"Sorry, I can't speak Polish." She says as she stepped forward to him.

"Czy nie o tym myśleć. wiem, że mówisz polskiego komunikowania się ze mną." He says growling with anger as he dived onto the the girl taking her down and beating her up, then. She was down. Gone.

"This is the house of madness. Not the house of goodness- I mean..." He stood there staring at me, "You know what forget it I'll just tell you. Long ago in this house there was a curse, that girl was the one who made it and she was told to be the ghost of this house and to guard the Corpse room. Known now as the suicidal room, and her the suicidal spirit. Who enters there will be forced to commit suicide, luckily you escaped. So all I'm saying now is to not go in that room again. Understand?" He told me firmly, eyes glaring at me.

"Yes." I replied quietly, I stared at the ground embarrassed of being told off already. He looked back at me with a sad expression.

"I'm just living by the rules, I wish I could change them.. But I can't. Sorry." He says as he turned away.

Then I found myself falling again. This time at my... House.. Where my mother and farther were alive. They were watching the news. I listened.

"14 Year old girl Olivia Maryot died at a house from either commiting suicide or overdose. Her corpse wasn't found and is believed to be a ghost. So if you see her haunting around bring her to us immediately." I stared in shock. As I turned to my mum and dad.

"Mum? Dad?" I say staring at the television in horror.

That was when I again fell in the same hole deep down. Into the same room. That was when the "Suicidal Girl" came in.

"I told you. Painless isn't it? Now enjoy your suicide. Join me. Or be a enemy.." She says closing the door, locking me in. Shae didn't come in, but I could hear mumbles. I held a pen my hands trembling as I wrote down my "goodbye" letter.

Dear Suicidal Spirit And Other People,

I hate how unfair this is. I hate how you want us so bad. I hate how much you disrespect humanity. I hate how much you want us to end our lives just to join you. I hate everything that you say. I hate how you lie to us. I hate how you rule the house. I hate how you think you're so important. Most of all I hate you. The other people in this house were great to me, but you suicidal spirit. We're the only one that hated me. Hated my guts. I guess that's okay now. Because I'm going to take my revenge. And it's going to be the one when you regret what you did to me. Are you happy to know that now? Because this one isn't painless. If you can control pain then so can I. My friend is going to be with me as well. And I can't say I trust anyone in this house. I can't say I trust anyone else either. Just my friend, we have been friends for long enough and if we are likley to argue that means that our friendship just isn't that great anymore but I can't understand how a few days off on a journey through places without being together can affect that so badly. I guess I'm kinda running out of sheets to write on.

yours,

Olivia.

Neve

Erm. I'm actually dead now so I guess it's just a pen moving. Ah well. I was brutally murdered by my own friend Olivia. But she has a good reason why. Well it's time to get revenge then. I guess it's just how this is supposed to be in life. I wonder why she needs revenge but you know it isn't going to be that bad. Right? All we have to do is kill the "Suicidal Spirit" right? I mean I had a painless suicide. well. Force to suicide. So that means my next victim will feel pain unlike I did? well. I'm going to stalk them now I don't I'll have time to summarise what happened. I'll try.

12:00PM NIGHT

Okay I managed to kill 12 victims in total. Not that bad. I have other people to kill anyway. I guess then. I did kill the "Suicidal Spirit" but you know. That didn't really count because it was Olivia's revenge anyway. I'm going to be so busy near the weekend just murdering I guess it's time for me to go. Bye.

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